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Giles's avatar

I just realized there could be a slight misunderstanding.

Author’s Note: The only actual breast reference is in line 1. Line 4 is pointing out an inadequacy of the male character’s life skills.

Yomna's avatar

No but I wouldn’t actually mind the metaphor symbolizing how a man cannot give life.

Giles's avatar

Duly noted. Great idea for the future. Thank you, Yomna.

Yomna's avatar

Thank you for writing!