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Tiffany Leininger's avatar

I like the way this poem creates a whole story in my head, complete with disturbing characters and a messed up plot line. Love it.

Giles's avatar

🙏 Thank you so much. I’ll work to keep them coming.

William Melgar's avatar

Almost exactly like a fairy tale Giles! Incredible work

Suzie's avatar

This creeped me out in the best way — it also gave me a reminder of the film about Ed Gein

Michelle's avatar

A child-like fear took over me for a moment there. Great work!

Giles's avatar

Thank you. It was fun to write.

Drew Benjamin Wall's avatar

Brilliant work here, Giles

Giles's avatar

Thanks Drew. Wasn’t sure how this one would go over 😅