a cinquain sequence
Those last lines, uffff.....🔪
"bringing death back with them
to take unprotected virgins
at sleep"
Thank you. I wasn’t sure how the closing would be received, so… big breath of relief 💜
I like the images of Schwinn bikes and
plate-shift sidewalks and the way you said
“all plein air in hushed existence
past tombs”
Thank you, Tiffany. I wasn’t exactly sure where I was going there, but I’m happy to hear it’s working 💜
Those last lines, uffff.....🔪
"bringing death back with them
to take unprotected virgins
at sleep"
Thank you. I wasn’t sure how the closing would be received, so… big breath of relief 💜
I like the images of Schwinn bikes and
plate-shift sidewalks and the way you said
“all plein air in hushed existence
past tombs”
Thank you, Tiffany. I wasn’t exactly sure where I was going there, but I’m happy to hear it’s working 💜